The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph presents information on the composition of the population living in urban areas in six distinct continents of the globe in three particular years (1950, 2007, 2050). Overall, it is observed that a growing trend of a higher proportion of people living in urban areas amongst the given places.
Based on the information provided in the bar chart, the growth rate of the percentage of inhabitants living in urban areas in regions such as North America, Oceania and Europe were fell behind by others regions. Between 1950 and 2007, Oceania climbed gradually from 62% to nearly 70% and it ...
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Sentence: Based on the information provided in the bar chart, the growth rate of the percentage of inhabitants living in urban areas in regions such as North America, Oceania and Europe were fell behind by others regions.
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