Essay Question: Some people think children should start formal education as early as possible while others believe children should do so after 7.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It has been argued that pre-school age children ought to start their academic study at 7 years age; however, others believe this should begin in early childhood. In my opinion, grader schooler age should begin after 7 years old. This essay will discuss that the children would be allowed in school latter age for academic to develop their basic communication and social skill, and how children get habitual when early schooling start.
On the one hand, people who advocates for official study begin in the early age consider this might help children to routine in former age and successful in academic. This is because children naturally adapt to learning situation after 2 years of age and will graduate earlier from school. For example, The survey conducted by Ministry Of Education, Singapore last year shows result that early age admission in school of pupils have better regularity in study and habitual to the school compare with who join after 7 year of age.
However, I believe that children should allow ample time of their childhood development before burdening them with grade school because this is the time for them to learn their basic skills. The research on human development by WHO in year 2015, for instances, abstract show that pre-school age children, who are at an early age, 55% of them lack in the development of their skill like communication and understand the their existence efficiently and significantly would not able to complete their schooling. Therefore, it is worth that child to utilize their early age in social interaction with other same age babies than books study.
To conclusion, there are different views on the children official age to go for educational institute. In my view, children should begin their education formally after 7 years of age in a bid to develop their interpersonal skills during pre-school age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 416, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...skill like communication and understand the their existence efficiently and significantly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06840390879 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64294864906 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524429967427 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.102224866 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.454545455 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19345080885 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104642566223 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517578376569 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152419745724 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669992189553 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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