Over the past years, many countries have experienced quick progress in economy. As a result, it made an urban life better than the rural, which may bring some problems for such countries. This essay will explore two of the problems which have resulted from these changes and propose measures which might address them.
One of the main problems of this change is overpopulation. This is because in cities there are lots of factories and shops, which can provide an unemployed person with a job and promote lifefor living in the urban area. For example, now Astana has five times greater population size than twenty years ago. To solve this problem, the government must provide countryside people with work by constructing schools, universities, hospital, companies. As a result, there would not be migration flow of people to the big citiesurban area.
Another problem for this occasion is a probability offor appearing a social gap. This is because in town there are many opportunities for finding/to be hired in getting a well-paid job, education, services, as a result, city citizens will be richer, smarter than the people who live in a village. For instance, bank workers in cities may earn high amount of money, while in the countryside this profession may even do not exist due to for the lack of banks. To tackle this problem, the government should find ways to improve living standards in rural areas by providing an access for urgent needs of villagers. This would result in equality of inhabitants in both areas.
In conclusion, governments could certainly implement a range of measures to enhance living condition in two areas simultaneously.
- IN RECENT YEARS SOME COUNTRIES HAVE EXPERIENCED VERY RAPID ECONOMIC DEVELOPMENT.THIS HAS RESULTED IN MUCH HIGHER STANDARD OF LIVING IN URBAN AREAS BUT NOT IN COUNTRYSIDE.THIS SITUATION MAY BRING SOME PROBLEMS FOR THE COUNTRY AS A WHOLE.WHAT ARE THE PROBLE 78
- In many countries the tradition of families having meals together is disappearing. Why is this happen? What will be the effects of it to the family and to the society? 83
- Nursing Homes.Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09157509158 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79873136644 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1604218406 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203416381393 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703842992039 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452978499691 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119058957213 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585507154506 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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