What to wear daily is a daily issue that people meet, and clothes always have a place in the fashion field no matter how the times change. Some people wonder whether how one dresses reveals one's personality. People hold different views. Although many people believe that the way an individual dresses indicates her or his character, I cannot disagree with this statement more.
First of all, many people dress similarly in particular environments, but they have different personalities. Most high school students and workers in some companies are required to wear uniforms. There is no difference in the way they dress, but we cannot say that there is no distinction in their characters as well. For instance, my sister, who is a normal high school student, always wears uniform. She and her best friend often study together and stay together. They wear school uniforms like twins, but they have different characteristics. My sister is quiet while Emma is active, and my sister likes classic music while Emma likes popular music. Also, they sometimes buy and wear similar clothes outside of the school. In this case, having similar clothes does not having similar personalities.
What's more, a people dresses differently depending on place and situation. Does it mean his or her personality is ever-changing? I believe no! In fact, whenever I go out with my co-workers, I try to dress a little formally. In contrast, whenever I stay with my friends, I wear causal clothes. Besides, the way I dress depends on not only people around me, but also on locations or activities. For instance, I would never wear formal clothes when I want to go rock climbing. In a world, how one dresses does not necessarily reveal one's personality.
Ultimately, I firmly disagree that the way an individual would dress indicates his or her personality because in many situations people wear uniform or similar clothes, yet they have different characteristics. Besides, the style of people keeps changing depending on their companion, on location, and on activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, similarly, so, well, while, for instance, in contrast, in fact, in particular, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10714285714 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.873465281 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526785714286 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2568887726 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240283928999 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738778576496 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882218700749 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185508708355 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783253839386 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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