Most of parents in Korea prefer to teach their kids at least one language when the kids are too young. I think during the university is better time to learn another language. They are too young to understand the expressions from other languages. They do not have sufficient chances to develop the skills that requires for conversation. They are already busy to focus on their classes.
Language includes the traditional emotion that they have. They even do not know about their country culture well. They might are able to know about only grammar if they learn from the lecture. When I was in old school, I only knew about the grammar. It is hard to learn the language from the typical school in Korea because they treat the language as a study.
The reason why people try to learn another language is to have conversation with foreigner. However, if they are young, they cannot have the chance to have conversation. They just get ready for future even though they do not have any conviction. If I am not in international school, I could not have any chance.
Most of students are busy to study their lecture. If they learn the language now, they might study only grammar even though they the focus should be communication. In other words, they do not have other ways to learn second languages except inefficient way if they try to learn before college. If they study during the university, they can have diverse way and chances.
To have second language, we need to understand their culture. I think if they want to speak a foreign language, they need to be perfect on their mother tongue. The young period is for mother tongue. They can have the opportunity when they are adult.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the parents') or simply say ''Most parents''.
Suggestion: Most of the parents; Most parents
Most of parents in Korea prefer to teach their kids at ...
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Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... skills that requires for conversation. They are already busy to focus on their clas...
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Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... do not know about their country culture well. They might are able to know about ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the students') or simply say ''Most students''.
Suggestion: Most of the students; Most students
...chool, I could not have any chance. Most of students are busy to study their lecture. If the...
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Line 6, column 150, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...ar even though they the focus should be communication. In other words, they do not have other...
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Line 6, column 218, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to second'
Suggestion: to second
...s, they do not have other ways to learn second languages except inefficient way if the...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the opportunity when they are adult.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, well, at least, i think, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72297297297 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46864698794 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462837837838 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3300076339 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.5454545455 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4545454545 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255071105913 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920862064584 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058482724159 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164236821459 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296039882345 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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