Dear Susan,
It is wonderful day and I miss you very much. Today I wanna notice you that I will be marred. I believe that you are extremely surprise with this news. Do you remember Tom who was study with our in MT university. The man with blond hair and attractive eyes who made me crazy most of the time when I studied. Unbelievable, I met him again at last years and three month ago he told me that he love me and want to be my husband. I cannot tell you how happy when he gave me engagement. I and Tom decided to hold cozy party wedding at beach with some special guess and you are one of them. I wanna have a wedding at the place when the fist time we met again. I think we will have a unforgettable moment in there with sea, sunset and candle.
The wedding day is 15th July. You are my best friend and cannot absent in my wedding. I hope you can joining in the best important time in my life. It have a lot of meaning with me. Love you, Marry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'surprised'.
Suggestion: surprised
...arred. I believe that you are extremely surprise with this news. Do you remember Tom who...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...I met him again at last years and three month ago he told me that he love me and want...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 586, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... special guess and you are one of them. I wanna have a wedding at the place when ...
^
Line 2, column 655, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... place when the fist time we met again. I think we will have a unforgettable mome...
^
Line 2, column 676, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...time we met again. I think we will have a unforgettable moment in there with sea,...
^
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'join'
Suggestion: join
...ot absent in my wedding. I hope you can joining in the best important time in my life. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... the best important time in my life. It have a lot of meaning with me. Love you, Mar...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.98952879581 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17994778921 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591623036649 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4075746709 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.8 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153274420285 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551877428763 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301892073998 0.0603063233224 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122909517825 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132284353335 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.7 8.37731958763 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.97 8.71597938144 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.97 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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