Nowadays, people move from one country to another for work. Some people think children of these families suffer because of this, while others think it is helpful for them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It’s considered by many that parents who frequently change the place of living in a search of new career opportunities make their children suffer from it, while other people think that young members of family can benefit from such a way of life. I can partially agree with both views because introducing a child to a new culture can influence their development positively but, at the same time, put a heavy burden on their psychological state.
On the one hand, constant need to adjust to new social environment may occur rather difficult for young people. This is to say, the difference in mentality, standards of behavior and approaches in upbringing a young generation, which are practiced and appreciated in other country, may cause inner contradictions in a child and their unwillingness to accept the new reality and society as they are. Language barrier can also be regarded as another issue of concern. Children, especially those who are going through major struggles of their puberty as well as young preschoolers, may face the problem of misunderstanding while socializing with their peers, what can make them reserved and unsociable or, moreover, can trigger an inferiority complex. I strongly believe that all the difficulties mentioned above in this essay must be taken into consideration by parents in order to make sure their children have a stable emotional background and feel comfortable having been put into a new cultural environment, because professional interests and ambitions shouldn’t be preferred over the offspring’s well-being.
On the other hand, moving to another country may have some advantages for children and the most significant ones are bilingualism and the opportunity to make new friends. In the era of computers, mobile phones and the Internet young people can easily socialize with their peers from all over the globe virtually, with the help of social networks. So, why can’t they do it in real life? In my opinion, meeting people who represent another culture or another walk of life can help to gain new experience and make a child’s view of life more flexible and extended. Furthermore, language skills have always been thought to be a competitive advantage in most professional fields.
To conclude, while parents move from one place to another in attempt to work their way up the career ladder, children can suffer tremendously from constant changes in their social environment, although meeting new people and studying foreign languages can be beneficial for their development and future job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l for their development and future job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29512195122 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04643910094 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558536585366 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.9986608439 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.0 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5384615385 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22661348612 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808604607721 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714812397075 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155318582267 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433415005844 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.