I think most of the rules are for our best. It may lead us to be responsible and deciscive in the future, for example, society wants young people to work harder and instead of wasting their time surfing on the net and checking out social media and watching T.V. try to use their precious time to learn something that really matters, study, and prepare themselves for future.
children must know that today life is being harsh and if they haven't got used to hard work they won't survive. If they don't gain some skills they won't be able to find a good job, so they cannot prosper. So society including parents, school, and university should prepare some program for this issue, to teach young people which are the future of our nations, how to spend their time efficiently, and how to make their own life decision so as to become successful in their academic and social life. If we ignore this important issue it may cause severe damages to our society aspects. If our children wouldn't learn to deal with life dilemma, they cannot accept responsibility and gradually society would deteriorate.
In conclusion, I think that even if some rules seem to be so harsh and unfair to young, they are for their own best, to survive in this cruel world, so we have to figure out how to teach them to be responsible and avoid some new technology until they are mature enough not to be affected by celebrities and movies, and other stuffs which may appears on the social media.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: sadeer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...dy, and prepare themselves for future. children must know that today life is being hars...
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Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...t today life is being harsh and if they havent got used to hard work they wont survive...
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Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...to hard work they wont survive. If they dont gain some skills they wont be able to f...
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Line 2, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple which are the future of our nations, how to spend their time efficiently, and...
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Line 2, column 436, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...and how to make their own life decision so as to become successful in their academic and...
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Line 2, column 498, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sful in their academic and social life. If we ignore this important issue it may c...
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Line 2, column 600, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...to our society aspects. If our children wouldnt learn to deal with life dilemma, they c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 262.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59160305344 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34925136885 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.873631379 48.9658058833 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.375 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.75 20.6045352989 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0747527801206 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380829340936 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0179057877244 0.0737576698707 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053555093903 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195204873997 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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