Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Nowadays, it is unacceptable that focus on one carrier on their future. People who are all having multiple knowledge and update their skills daily basis those can manage in the current fastest world. The following essay will explain that why we need to have multi level skills.
It is fact that in the older days, people are very honest and what they have focused their jobs and they have more concentrated on their own until their get retirement. Past generation were enjoying their work and most of them got the Government jobs easily without any competitions. Now current generation is very pathetic to get a job in order to the huge population for most of the countries so people are getting knowledge on multiple technologies to become a good leader. For instance, company CEO has to get multiple skill sets on varies sectors such as finance, manufacturing, sales and distribution apparel in order to handle company.
Furthermore, it is undeniable that continues education is an essential things these days. whoever those are not updating their knowledge, they will get suffer lot to survey in current world. For instance, people who work in the Information technology sector should update themselves with the latest type of antivirus software, since many new viruses which are threatening the networks these days. Those who fail to update their software will face serious problems in their database.
In conclusion, I personally believe that having different types of works in life is a positive thing and bring a lot of benefits to the person's career, and it is important for people to study or learn throughout their life as the world never stop to develop.
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- Some people think that it is good to start to work at an early age. Others feel that it is better only to study. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e.g. literature), and boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g. physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? 84
- Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children? 73
- Some people link that children showed go to kindergarden before attending primary school,which others believe that is better for children to stay all day with their families. Discuss both 67
- Write a letter to the bus company about something you lost on a bus In your letter give details of your bus trip tell them what you lost and explain what you d like them to do 48
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...dge and update their skills daily basis those can manage in the current fastest world. Th...
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Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dge on multiple technologies to become a good leader. For instance, company CEO h...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...hat continues education is an essential things these days. whoever those are not updat...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whoever
...tion is an essential things these days. whoever those are not updating their knowledge,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03237410072 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68147795064 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597122302158 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0837591225 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109644036861 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435008644588 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316821835476 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719327869552 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255895019552 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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