College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
In times of financial and social insecurity, freshmen entering college are often encouraged by parents and fellow students alike to choose courses that will most likely lead to a so-called ‚successful career‘. While this might be a tempting approach, especially regarding the huge variety of options to choose from, students should instead take the courses that they are most interested in. Ultimately, this approach will yield a more successful college experience, with better grades and a more cultivated mind.
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Sentence: This example shows that the two views presented at the beginning are actual a false dichotomy: Often, if you pursue your interests, you will even get a better job in the end.
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