Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Technology evolution and society trends dealing with cuisine have recently increate for many people the possibility to cook their own meals in a very short time. In my opinion, this cultural shift is bringing positive consequences in the way people approach to food and alimentation.
First of all, many people have the possibility to cook by themselves, avoiding eating junk food every day. One of the main causes that led to the diffusion of burgers, fries, pizzas was in fact the difficulty for many people to find time to prepare at home their own meal. Nowadays, people are instead learning that cooking is a very important part of our everyday lives, as what we eat contributes to our own health. For instance, if an employee in the 80’s was used to eat pizza and fries everyday, perhaps today he has the chance to prepare something at home and bringing it to his job place, to have a healthy meal.
Secondly, the chance to cook in a shorter time has positive effects on family lunches, as the parents are no more required hours to prepare healthy foods like vegetable soups. This also allows to families the possibility to enlarge the usual variety of foods they are used to eat, experimenting new and preferably healthy dishes. For instance, instead of eating pasta or steaks almost every day, children can have their fair amount of vegetables, proteins and other useful foods that are required to stay healthy despite nowadays general lifestyle.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the evolution of cuisine, and the related way to cook, is having a positive effect on people health, allowing a wider consume of healthy foods. I am sure that, as cooking changed in the last century, it will keep evolving in the next decades, towards a more healthy relationship between men and foods.
- More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor 85
- You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much.Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also sugg 92
- The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make co 80
- You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home. You want to give your opinion about this.Write a latter to the editor of your local newspaper. In your letter:- explain how you learnt about these plans;- say what you thi 67
- You are going to study in a college in the UK next year You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence Write a letter to the college giving your accomodation requirements You should outline what your room and food needs are and also ask what altern 80
Sentence: Technology evolution and society trends dealing with cuisine have recently increate for many people the possibility to cook their own meals in a very short time.
Error: increate Suggestion: increase
Sentence: In my opinion, this cultural shift is bringing positive consequences in the way people approach to food and alimentation.
Error: alimentation Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 307 350
No. of Characters: 1453 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.186 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.733 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.513 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.909 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.946 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.385 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.623 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5