Technology is a tool that is present in all aspects of our life. There is a discussion about the utility of this tool and the consequences behind it, some people might see it in a positive way while others believe that technology might harm society more than bring benefits to it. Personally, I believe technology helps to make our life simpler because it is a tool that allows us to make more creative activities instead take care of ordinary routines.
One might argue that technology harms more people than bring benefits to them. For instance, social networks became places where there is a lot of rage among people which could harm feelings of the persons within it. Furthermore, technology is associated with distractions since people are not been able to keep their focus on their tasks anymore and at the same time they are not been able to develop important skills for their lives. For instance, video games are considered to be one of the main reasons why kids are not having good grades in school nowadays.
While these arguments might have fair points, they don't consider many positive points related to technologies. When social network is used wisely it might become an interesting place for discussions where people might get helped and offer advice to another one. Before tools like Facebook or email it used to be difficult to assemble people or to inform them about important activities and tasks. Nowadays with the help of these tools people develop better ways to inform themselves and also they were able to avoid put effort in tasks life trying to inform people and they were able to focus on what really matters.
Moreover, technologies like video games when used with proper supervision might be very useful to boost creativity toward children. For instance, Finland which is a country recognized by it outstanding educational system is now using games like Minecraft in their schools. This game was adapted to the classes and it is used as a tool to develop creativity among students. Other games might have this same capacity when people don't use them in an excessive way.
In conclusion, one can say that technology is making our life simpler. When it is properly used it has a lot of benefits since people might connect each other in a better way and also they might be able to develop skills trough certain technologies.
- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position 66
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 66
- Do you agree or disagree that grade school students should bring a cell phone to school Use details and examples to support your explanation 91
- Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer. 91
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87562189055 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51916246995 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509950248756 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8045320943 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.294117647 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6470588235 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173480928871 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661529667048 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617110949132 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11300342316 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05346536181 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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