Your neighbors have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter:
• describe the problem with the dog
• explain why it is important for you to sleep
• outline what your neighbors could do about the situations
Dear Kanwal,
Iam writing to you to bring your attention a problem, that I have been having with your dog at night. I am hoping that you would resolve the issue.
As you aware, Iam working in a construction company and my job timing is very tough 9:00am to 6:30 pm. Iam working as a town planner, so I need more concentration on new ideas regarding planning of new urban areas. Therefore, for healthy sleeping silent environment is essential. I have been suffering a problem for last two months, just because of your dog.it started digging holes in the garden and often making loud noises. I was awoken by your dog’s barks several times at whole night, and I had even consult a doctor and had been prescribed some sleeping pills.
I have respect you, and I hope you can feel my stress regarding this. I strongly recommend you away your dog from here to another place.
Iam looking forward to here positive response from your side.
Your sincerely,
Erum Panhwar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 511, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'consulted'.
Suggestion: consulted
...al times at whole night, and I had even consult a doctor and had been prescribed some s...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... been prescribed some sleeping pills. I have respect you, and I hope you can fe...
^
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you can feel my stress regarding this. I strongly recommend you away your dog fr...
^
Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r side. Your sincerely, Erum Panhwar
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76023391813 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49478098238 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4296033456 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38410982544 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137827448478 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103326102321 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233142214764 0.12726935374 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101594686757 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.