Dear Sir,
I'm writing this letter with regards to a course that i have opted in JNTU university. I'm Sanjeev kumar currently living in Hyderabad enrolled for team building skills development part-time course.
Firstly, JNTU University is best in the city for this subject and i'm very much pleased that i got selected. Team building skills development course is planned for 6 months and classes are planned on weekdays.
I do have a concern regarding the activities planned during this course. Each activity involved are theoretical based i.e, only classroom sessions are available. It is would great if practical session are also added. Practicals can help an individual to enhance and exhibit skills that has been learnt. I would suggest you to have a tie up with a private organisation for an internship program. It would help the students to sustain in real world.
Thanking you.
Yours sincerely,
Sanjeev
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24832214765 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74712342026 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671140939597 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6171475194 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0909090909 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5454545455 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173176235159 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618875790227 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650894298312 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1060192353 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645965396393 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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