Dear Sam,
I hope you are doing well. I'm writing to inform you that I have shifted to a new apartment last week.
We had to shift to a new place because the building wasn't safe to live anymore, as it was an old construction. In addition to this, my kids were finding it quite inconvenient to commute daily to school, and were missing important lessons as a result of this.
You will be quite happy to know that our new apartment is a newly constructed building, situated close to my son's school.It's has 3 BHK apartment, with a small terrace garden and a reserved parking space. It has all the basic amenities like swimming pool , gym, a playground for kids and a clubhouse providing a convenient environment for socializing.
I would like you to visit soon with family and I'm sure we i'll have a great time. How about next week or by the end of this month ? Let me know by the end of this week, so that I can do the necessary arrangements for the special day.
Anyway, I look forward to hearing from you shortly.
Warm wishes,
Sameer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Dear Sam, I hope you are doing well. Im writing to inform you that I have shift...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ift to a new place because the building wasnt safe to live anymore, as it was an old ...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Its
...lding, situated close to my sons school.Its has 3 BHK apartment, with a small terr...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng, situated close to my sons school.Its has 3 BHK apartment, with a small terrac...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'apartment' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'apartments'.
Suggestion: apartments
... close to my sons school.Its has 3 BHK apartment, with a small terrace garden and a rese...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l the basic amenities like swimming pool , gym, a playground for kids and a clubho...
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Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... like you to visit soon with family and Im sure we ill have a great time. How abou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, look, so, well, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.484375 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62251608284 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7308776197 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2727272727 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180050618587 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066102484234 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802326147681 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109640758469 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858297115778 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.