Dear Mr Brown,
My name is Gaurav, and I have recently moved next door, in apartment number 2018.
I am writing this letter to notify you about my house warming party scheduled next weekend, on the 25th of August, 9pm, and to extend this letter as an invite to you and your family to be a part of it.
As you may know, I have recently moved to this building and I am thrilled to be a part of Duke of York Community.
The apartment is really cozy, and it looks over the biggest mall in Mississauga, the square one. My friends, and work colleagues are very excited to visit.
We have plans to have a few drinks, and have dinner at the apartment itself, and then head out for ice cream. The only thing I'm worried about that this might create some noise around the apartment, and you might get disturbed. I promise that I will try and not cause any ruckus with the noise, and I will let my guest know to keep it low all the time.
I apologise if this may cause any inconvenience to you and I trust you would understand.
Looking forward to see you at the party.
Yours Sincerely,
Gaurav
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Brown, My name is Gaurav, and I have recently m...
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Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: AN_INVITE[1]
Message: Use only in informal register. In other registers, 'invitation' should be used.
Suggestion: invitation
...t, 9pm, and to extend this letter as an invite to you and your family to be a part of ...
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Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... head out for ice cream. The only thing Im worried about that this might create so...
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Line 9, column 250, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ht get disturbed. I promise that I will try and not cause any ruckus with the noise, an...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...u would understand. Looking forward to see you at the party. Yours Sincerely, ...
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Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you at the party. Yours Sincerely, Gaurav
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Line 16, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the party. Yours Sincerely, Gaurav
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3768115942 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30968401482 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.463917525773 1724% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0758772598 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3636363636 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234530237197 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824336248162 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728190221674 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879607072853 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563275029457 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.