If you want to choose to travel to one of two places that you have in mind, which of the following two ways do you prefer?-Finding information online about the two places-Asking friends who have been to the two places
Since the dawn of humanity, there has been a heated controversy among people concerning reaching an agreement on what the best way of earning useful information about the place of traveling is. Traveling to the different places and giving time to yourself to release the stresses are the most important part of human beings' life. Since we all are suffering from living in a hectic lifestyle, dedicating some of our time to travel is the period of mind when all of the aspects including science can flourish and burgeon. Different people adopt various methods and policies for finding the most useful information about the places to travel among which asking from friends or searching on the internet are the most dominant elements that can have substantial and significant influences on anyone's decision. I, personally, subscribe to the idea that searching online and finding information by using the internet is more helpful for a quite a few reasons, the two conspicuous ones of which are elaborated upon hereunder.
The first pivotal reason which exhorted me to opt for this point of view is that it takes a lot of time to find a friend who was at the same two places before and in some cases, you may not be able to find one. I am of the conviction that internet and technology are marching in a galloping, seemingly inexorable rate, leaving us submissive to its dominion over our lives; therefore, if you try to search online just by typing "traveling to the place which you are eager to go" in the google website, you will find a lot of useful information related to that topic. Delving further into the issue, since in today world, everybody is sympathetic toward sharing their experiences with others by writing those in their website or personal pages in the social media, you will be able to know about either their experiences in the same places or the conditions and cultures attributed to those places. To elucidate on, finding the people who are your friends and also have traveled to those places is not easy and will take your time; consequently, no room is left for squandering the most precious gift of the life-time.
The other equally compelling reason in corroborating my stance in this subject is that the information which is earned and acquired by asking your friends is not reliable information as it is intensely personal and if your personality is not close to your friends, you will not be able to benefit from them. To cast light, let's suppose the condition and situation in which you are a person who loves traveling to places that have beautiful serenities, yet your friend is a person who enjoys traveling to historical places. It is incontrovertibly axiomatic that in that case you will not be capable of using your friend's information and maybe you will conclude that your friend was lying to you which can be a crucial milestone. Consequently, it lends credence to the stance taken that asking information from your friends can arise the opportunity to lose your chance to travel to the place in which you can enjoy. On the other hand, since the internet is a wide place and if you keep track of its rate and up-to-date information, it can give a lot of impartial information by talking about the various merits and demerits of the places. Although you may not find very related information in some cases in which you are trying to go to unknown places, by ignoring these exceptions internet can augment your information and knowledge and help you to find the best place for the alleviation of your negative stresses.
To sum up, after perusing all the above paragraphs, it can be concluded that obtaining information through the internet has paramount importance. In spite of the fact purchasing information by either asking friend or searching online have their own benefits and advantageous, not only can the internet help you more to enjoy your traveling time but also it can give some contributions to you to find different friends from all over the world by chatting with them about those places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...es are the most important part of human beings life. Since we all are suffering from l...
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Line 1, column 458, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...me to travel is the period of mind when all of the aspects including science can flourish ...
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Line 3, column 1270, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'exceptions'' or 'exception's'?
Suggestion: exceptions'; exception's
...go to unknown places, by ignoring these exceptions internet can augment your information a...
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Line 3, column 1337, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help you find' instead.
Suggestion: help you find
...ment your information and knowledge and help you to find the best place for the alleviation of y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, talking about, in some cases, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 15.1003584229 219% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.0286738351 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 114.0 52.1666666667 219% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3360.0 1977.66487455 170% => OK
No of words: 693.0 407.700716846 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84848484848 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.13077900149 4.48103885553 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75255995621 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 212.727598566 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437229437229 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1069.2 618.680645161 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.1344086022 199% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4023480315 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 197.647058824 100.406767564 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.7647058824 20.6045352989 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394665500761 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141139891299 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644724267147 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247818226864 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582391322164 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 11.7677419355 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.1575268817 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 86.8835125448 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.0537634409 179% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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