Using a computer every day can have more negative then positive effect on children. Do you agree or did agree.
There is drastic changes in today’s world and rapid growth due to advancement in technology.in this essay we will discuss about positive and negative effects on children.
Computer is having multi propose tools those are we use each and every day to listen speaker, to print printer, to watch display, to input key board or mouse even gaming joystick too.most of time children spend there time on playing games, they love to complete challenges. Because of those they are not able concentrate on there study. Even computer has improved our study peterns like e-learning is rapidly giving total experience to students. W3 is famous e-learning website.
With the use of chat application like yahoo messenger, facebook and many more social media software are wconsuming lots of prisious time to unnecessary cheating with friends. There are search engines which are great tool to retrieve information for further study. Project also from internet easily get through google. There are clan games are multiplayer team if a person involve in then that become habit, it played internationally.
Parents has to focus on child’s schedules. Some time parents should allow them to play game for fun. Rather then spending time on computer they should spend time on study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are drastic changes'?
Suggestion: There are drastic changes
There is drastic changes in today's world and rapid growth ...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ames, they love to complete challenges. Because of those they are not able concentrate ...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...should allow them to play game for fun. Rather then spending time on computer they sho...
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Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...allow them to play game for fun. Rather then spending time on computer they should s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23529411765 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66545892489 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.7341617403 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154633495374 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378735047402 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469383366651 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830277946256 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035112725723 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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