The bar chart illustrates the percentage of men and women from Australia, grouped by age, who exercised frequently in 2010.
Overall, women exercised more than men in the given time period. Although both genders experienced some fluctuations, men appeared to be more active in their early ages, while women experienced a steady rise in physical activity as the years progressed.
Male teenagers were exercising the most when compared to the older men, at 52.8%. However, the figures steadily declined over the next two decades, as only 42.2 and 39.5% of men regularly worked out, respectively. This gradually rose to 46.7% in men over 65.
In contrast, only 47.7% of women were working out at their youngest. These figures progressively increased over the years, finally peaking in women aged 45 to 54, as 53.3% of them took part in physical activity daily. A slight drop in physical activity was noted in women aged 65, with only 47.1% of them keeping fit.
- The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. 78
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 78
- many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. 78
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both views and give your own opp 78
- Advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones in our daily lives 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04375 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66791556041 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6625 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.615604864 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318203117009 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122697993803 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110735261354 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2039778461 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126231298006 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.