Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform that I have misplaced my watch during my stay in your hotel last Wednesday.
It was a pleasant stay at your hotel, however I was very disappointed when I realized, I have left my watch in hotel. I think I may have forgot it in the cupboard of my room, just besides the refrigerator.
The watch was an expensive Rado, light blue in colour, with a small star mark engraved on the back. It was very special to me, since my elder sister had gifted me on my marriage anniversary last year.
I would really appreciate if you could check my room in hotel, as I am sure you would be able to find it there. In case, you are able to find it, please call me on 0123454 and I will come to collect it from you at the hotel.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Mathew Jones
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...alized I have I left my watch in hotel. I think I must forgot it in the cupboard ...
^
Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: blue
...expensive Swiss Rado wrist watch, light blue in colour, with a small star mark engraved on the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26946107784 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36303236889 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622754491018 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0861203229 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2222222222 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374716988543 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145617051315 0.0766984524023 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992496153949 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188526983105 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882443918674 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.