Mass media and the internet have caused people’s attention spans to get shorter. However, the overall effect has been positive: while people are less able to focus on one thing, they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through large quantities of information and find what’s important.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In our generation, each individual has an access to internet and media. We spend two-third of our time interacting with one on the other and thus they cause our attention to be divided. Saying that we can make a call that mass media and internet being the necessity of the time have positive effect on the selection of important things in people's life.
Internet serves as a large medium of information where one can find anything he/she looks out for. The major dilemma is to find the right one at right time. If we consider today's news channels, like CNN might be showing a news on the recent political change in our government and how they achieved victory in these elections but Times might be telling us the reasons why the losing party was not able to hold on to their seats. A person attention is divided among different channels and sources and thus leads to deviation in concentration. as we conveyed, a person get's more information on a single topic and therefore it increases their knowledge about the same. Internet provides us with multiple options to choose to and even judge them on the reviews provided by experts in that field and thus helps in better judgement.
Mass media and internet being a source through various mediums, offer an individual a particular response which he/she may not seek at that moment. At that time, with their enhanced ability to categorize the information, it provides an overview from which one can select the best answer they seek. Obviously an individual won't be able to give attention to each topic but provided with large options they can make a better call on the important factor. An undergraduate while looking for his/her options for the Post graduate colleges can make a better call by reviewing each college through internet and their presence in the mass media. Continuing to the selection process, they can speak to alumni of that particular college as they can provide them with best judgement and reviews of that college. Thus having more options from choose to and provided with answers for the best information always helps an individual in making a best call.
Though these sources have large information and ability to enhance our decision, we still can't neglect the fact that they have caused a lack of concentration and trust in an individual. People are always in a lookout for a better deal and information and thus they don't trust until they are provided with all facts and figures. Presence of these mediums has led to a gap between the individuals and they seek all the answers on these sources. As we always regret the deal we never heard of, through the presence of multiple options on internet one can always be regretting and will have fickle mind.
The mass media and internet provides an individual with a better judgement through large information and sorting them out in different categories. It's always beneficial to have more and better options.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
In our generation, each individual has an access to internet and media. We spend two-thi...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...ews channels, like CNN might be showing a news on the recent political change in our g...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in our government and how they achieved victory in these elections but Times mig...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...us leads to deviation in concentration. as we conveyed, a person gets more informa...
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Line 5, column 753, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...icular college as they can provide them with best judgement and reviews of that college. ...
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Line 5, column 930, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...on always helps an individual in making a best call. Though these sources have...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ility to enhance our decision, we still cant neglect the fact that they have caused ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tter deal and information and thus they dont trust until they are provided with all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, third, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2437.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 502.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85458167331 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57447674471 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440239043825 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.9 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0995953495 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.047619048 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9047619048 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274726124407 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906182169817 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510254228506 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170320269019 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490430985927 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.