Dear Sir,
Good Day!
I have just returned from a week long holiday to Maldives. I, along with my husband and 2 children took this trip. The to and fro journey was good. However, there was a problem at the hotel.
Once we reached there we were informed that the sunset villa which we had booked would not available for 2 days. There was a miscommunication with the hotel staff about our arrival. As a result we had to move to a smaller room for those 2 days. Never the less complimentary wine and chocolates were provided to make up for the inconvenience.
Also, there was some goof up with the dinner reservations. We had requested you to reserve the seaside dinner for my daughter's birthday. However bookings for the same were not done. Hence, we couldn't celebrate her birthday as planned. The whole point of this family trip was to celebrate the birthday. My family was very disappointed.
After reading a lot of reviews we decided to go with your travel agency. But the experience was not so pleasant. I would like to request a refund regarding the seaside dinner as the payment was made in advance. The inconvenience regarding the rooms were compensated for however the irresponsibility regarding the dinner reservation is not acceptable.
Overall the holiday was long awaited and we enjoyed thoroughly. Looking forward to a positive reply.
Yours Faithfully,
Rose Adams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould not available for 2 days. There was a miscommunication with the hotel staff ...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...ove to a smaller room for those 2 days. Never the less complimentary wine and chocola...
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Line 9, column 138, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...aside dinner for my daughters birthday. However bookings for the same were not done. He...
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Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...s for the same were not done. Hence, we couldnt celebrate her birthday as planned. The ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ay. My family was very disappointed. After reading a lot of reviews we decided to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, look, regarding, so, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92796610169 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87864715644 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597457627119 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0553389004 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.380952381 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.2380952381 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865307121622 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241358100704 0.0766984524023 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325589163215 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462664183475 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407876856234 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.13 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.