To be genuine, in today’s world the best decision is to work expeditiously, what literally means to be quick and to be sure that everything is correct, - in short, to be productive. Productivity is the most valuable and most demanded resource for every employer. Of course, for every business the choice may vary depending on sort of business, but, if to choose between quick but risky and slow but secur, I’d rather concern on the first variant. So the purpose of my essay is to discuss the benefits of the first option and then to conclude with my preference.
First of all, we should not forget that we live in the 21th century, the century of fast growth and development. To resist the comparison, companies should work effectively, quickly and with an ability of taking risks for its own sake. World is full of great minds, so sometimes it may be just too late if you work slowly but consciously. The nice example of a great loss is a well known cartoon called Aladdin produced by Disney Company. Initially, the movie had to be more colorful, more detailed and worked out. Furthermore, it was depicted on paper. But release of the movie demanded to take more and more time, that’s why Disney Company just decided to take the idea and create its own cartoon, wasting no more time. And it has a great success, even though it was stylized in a much more simple way. As for the original, it was released as well; however, it could not become as famous as its simplified version.
Second advantage of fast but risky work is that it doesn’t require to be waited too much. All of us can agree that we would like to have everything at once and nobody likes to wait. So for the prosper purpose it’s better to do not make customers wait too long. The more costumers need to wait the less they are interested in the product. The situation with “Fallout 3” describes this term in the best and most relatable way.
Third, and the most beneficial advantage of quick but risky assignments is that humans are naturally programmed being able to get used to variety of circumstances. In short, we are able to improve ourselves doing certain kinds of work. And the more we do something meeting up with predicament like lack of time, the better our concentration and mindfulness become.
So, to summarize my thoughts, I want to remind the well-known idea that time is money. And according to this statement, in my personal opinion, companies should work fast, dealing with all possible risks, but still not forgetting to alter for the better result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, still, then, third, well, as for, in short, of course, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75278396437 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69159092887 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54565701559 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6526506455 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7826086957 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5217391304 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69565217391 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224351991591 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561475961573 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477453867829 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112754742274 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323556085613 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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