People are always trying to learn new skills and improve their knowledge, in order to feel valuable in society. Whether it is suitable to use books for learning or take a practical action is what is occasionally discussed . In my opinion, pragmatic measurements are much more efficacious than just reading books. This essay will discuss why the experience is more important.
First of all, most of the knowledge in books is theoretical, and researchers wrote them based on their own experience in life. Many scientists usually make hypothetical assumptions and expand thieir ideas based on a posit that might not be even be true. For instance, Greek philosophers introduced some physics rules based on their understanding of the universe. Never for years did human thinks discover new laws of physics until inthe 17th century when Galileo found out that some of ancient rules are wrong. If it were not for his experimental works, we would not have such sophisticated lives. So, not only are notis some knowledge not credible, but it might also may be completely incorrect. In fact, it is experience that evaluates the veracity of theories.
Secondly, it is easier to learn skills by experience rather than just reading some book about it. Usually, surplus details are mentioned in books, and dealing with those minor issues without actual interaction is frustrating. Accordingly, if I read a book about swimming and expect to be a professional swimmer, I will definitely fail. However, a person who practices in the swimming pool persistently would perform much better than the one who only read a book about it. Therefore, we can learn faster and more efficiently by using the experience.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is experience which helps people flourish in their lives. This is because experience is much more reliable and customized to each person who gains it. Furthermore, it is more straightforward to attain experience.
- Which one do you prefer? Why?A company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days or another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days. 70
- Compare And Contrast Knowledge Gained From Experience With Knowledge Gained From Books In Your Opinion Which Source Is More Important Why 83
- You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice. 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14465408805 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95226581937 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600628930818 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1308758435 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1052631579 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42105263158 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140571986717 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427401873663 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446815551492 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882802025233 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419568178543 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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