The three diagrams bellow show the development of, and plant for, the coastal zone of Brightsea
There are three diagrams that illustrate the development of coastal zone of Brightsea. The beginning of Brightsea growth starts from 1950.
In 1950, there fisherman’s collages were built there, near simple jetty. One lighthouse stand next lighthouse keeper’s house.
Today, Brightsea grow rapidly we can find a café near jetty. Ferry Wharf built more modern. There is a hotel not far from lighthouse. And we can see new construction of road. People in Brightsea now can shop easier because there is a shop cross the road.
In the future, Brightsea will develop more modern and there are so many new building. Ferry Wharf will move to south and has telecommunication antenna. Hotel will build bigger. Next hotel will construct a sailing club. Shop will replace by supermarket with car park. In the front of old jetty will build apartments and big restaurant.
In summary Brightsea grow from simple community became modern area with big hotel, apartments, and other support facilities
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- "Today, Brightsea grow rapidly"
- "In summary Brightsea grow from simple community became modern area with big hotel, apartments, and other support facilities"
- There is a hotel not far from lighthouse
Sentence: In summary Brightsea grow from simple community became modern area with big hotel, apartments, and other support facilities
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace grow with verb, past participle
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