The space travel is fantastic these days and people are very fascinated towards it but there are many environmental problems on our planet that need to be resolved first What is your opinion Should money be spent on space travel or on environmental issu

The Earth is the planet in which we are living, now our planet has been suffering from many issue which can not be ignore, although global warning issues united the whole world to focus on immediate problem of ozen layer. But NASA and space related organisation hardly trying to facilited humans to travel on space despite of realising that real need of human survival is the clean atmosphere in which we take our breath. I fully agree with the statement that money should be allocate more on environment rather than to add facilities to travel on space.

Addionally, the pollution not only affects the human being but also have dangerous impact on wild animals. For example, the emission of toxin gas into air cause many disease including lung cancer, similarly wastage of poision chemical discharge on water become reason of lossing life of wild animals.

On the contrary, if huge amount will spent on traveling space and on other planet make no sense. Because, its fact that whereever we travel at the end we have to stay and live in our own planet. Though, its better to clean the environment from harmful gases.

To summarise, the emergency need of funding is required for environment not to facinitate the travel on space.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun issue seems to be countable; consider using: 'many issues'.
Suggestion: many issues
... now our planet has been suffering from many issue which can not be ignore, although globa...
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Line 1, column 477, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'allocated'?
Suggestion: allocated
...with the statement that money should be allocate more on environment rather than to add ...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'many diseases'.
Suggestion: many diseases
...he emission of toxin gas into air cause many disease including lung cancer, similarly wastag...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
... On the contrary, if huge amount will spent on traveling space and on other planet ...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ave to stay and live in our own planet. Though, its better to clean the environment fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, for example, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88625592417 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44989318039 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644549763033 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1531458043 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.555555556 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287934716763 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108122156734 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676041720052 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154100391967 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834752096817 0.056905535591 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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