Experts feel that the design of the buildings sometimes has a positive effect on people’s life and work. Discuss.
In this era structures of building becomes more innovative like globe structure present the symbol of an earth which is the motherland for us. These type of structures have a positive effect on peoples life and work. I will discuss more views in upcoming paragraphs with logical conclusion.
To commence, there is no ambiguity to say that, types of building putt impact on people’s life. Round type of buildings having round roofs that prevent airlifting on the roof which is mostly helped during strong winds as in tsunami and twisters with it they feel safe under bad climates. Round buildings are emerge with steel cables, hurricanes, steel bracket that makes it safe in all seasons. And employees are work in lower risk of extreme weather.
To embark more, architecture of building also have a optimistic impact on the masses work. Like in winters they get vitamin d from the windows and ventilation also be established for do not feel suffocated and fresh air passes throw for their good atmosphere in inner of the building. They are less likely to fall sick with it.
In conclude designs of the building are really putt good effects on people’s life and work. So they feel good and do not feel illness with it. And also employees do work at lower risk in extreme weathers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85520361991 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59023591318 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597285067873 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7839070729 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5384615385 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 7.25397266985 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307100352824 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114755384505 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12521373879 0.071462118173 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185959639485 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924082738004 0.0609392437508 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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