This topic raises the controversial issue whether people have to understand any art such as a novel, a poem, a film, or a song clearly, and that will indicate a merit and laudable art work. indisputably, art is a crucial part of our life and it is a tool to revitalize our mind or soul. Hence, I totally disagree that the best tool to measure the art success is people understanding, because there are a lot of points that govern people opinions, thoughts or even their feelings that will contribute on the people understanding to art. However, to substantiate my case this essay will elaborate my reasons and examples in blatant way.
To begin with, it is irrefutable the importance of art in our daily life and we used to listen to our favorite song at morning or watch our action film at night. On one hand, art is a universal language between all people and sometime art says things just words cannot say. In other words, we cannot depend on laypersons understanding to evaluate outstanding or cosmopolitan art work. For example, people point of views are varied when they see the Mona Lisa painting because some of them see a smile face while others see a sad expression. Thus, it is a vivid example that people opinions are not significant to evaluate any arts .
In addition, the second vital point that should be taken into consideration is the vivid quot" the purpose of art is washing the dust of the daily life off our souls". Consequently, we can conclude that there are significant benefits that comes from art such as, art let us think, feel or even heal our broken heart. To illustrate my point, people opinions are very subjective to their feeling, thinking or emotional status. For example, our opinions will be different if we listen to a song in a good or bad mood, because we will mirror our feeling instead of the real value of the art.
Last but not least, it is un-debatable that sometime people opinion could reflect part of the art success if there is educated and specialist person. Plus, there are a lot of methods more accurate than people opinions such as a kind of specific statistic or even survey with reliable and plausible questions could measure the art value effectively.
In conclusion, due to aforementioned reasons and examples people opinions are not significant to reflect the art value, because in all cases people tend to be more subjective and mirror their internal feeling about any work, also they have to use reliable methods to decide if the art work is merit or not.
- The following appeared in an article in the Grandview Beacon."For many years the city of Grandview has provided annual funding for the Grandview Symphony. Last year, however, private contributions to the symphony increased by 200 p 55
- The following appeared in a magazine article about planning for retirement."Clearview should be a top choice for anyone seeking a place to retire, because it has spectacular natural beauty and a consistent climate. Another advantage is that housing costs 29
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Indisputably
...indicate a merit and laudable art work. indisputably, art is a crucial part of our life and ...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'understanding evaluating'.
Suggestion: understanding evaluating
...r words, we cannot depend on laypersons understanding to evaluate outstanding or cosmopolitan art work. F...
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Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...are not significant to evaluate any arts . In addition, the second vital point ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in all cases, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 442.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74886877828 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72777218611 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0951782115 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.1875 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 5.21951772744 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166958223774 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603371991453 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054249939601 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101076515048 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365634515124 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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