In the world today how can companies keep their employees happy Express your idea and bring reasons for example how salary health care and holiday can make employees happy

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In the world today, how can companies keep their employees happy? Express your idea and bring reasons, for example how salary, health care and holiday can make employees happy.

Majority of people in this world are labourers working for a company. In recent times, the stress level encountered and amount of work performed by them is enormous. Lets discuss about various ideas and reasons behind them to keep employees happy.

Important things that can be considered or put into effect immediately is salary increment for people who are paid much less. This would bring joy amongst them and to their families. This would help employees be more involved in work and dedication for best performers. Most importantly, salary normalization amongst labourers with different experience and salaries should be taken care off. As a result, employees will fell more comfortable and equalized.

Secondly, Recognition awards inclusive of money and certificates should be introduced. This would create a competitive spirit amongst resources that would make them more enthusiastic and indeed will develop creative solutions thus resulting in more profit to the organisation.

Finally, team outings are the best activity that can be organised by a company to get the resources even more motivated. These outings should concentrate more towards getting them together in a resort where lots of indoor and outdoor activities are planned and conducted. These would help them to relax and reduce the amount of stress level as a persons health is more of a concerning factor than earning money.

I am inclined to believe that employees should be treated equally and recognised for their hard work, which would make them feel more happy.

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Sentence: As a result, employees will fell more comfortable and equalized.
Description: The word fell is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: you mean 'feel'?

Sentence: These would help them to relax and reduce the amount of stress level as a persons health is more of a concerning factor than earning money.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: person's health

Sentence: This would create a competitive spirit amongst resources that would make them more enthusiastic and indeed will develop creative solutions thus resulting in more profit to the organisation.
Error: organisation Suggestion: organization

Sentence: Finally, team outings are the best activity that can be organised by a company to get the resources even more motivated.
Error: organised Suggestion: organized

Sentence: I am inclined to believe that employees should be treated equally and recognised for their hard work, which would make them feel more happy.
Error: recognised Suggestion: recognized

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No. of Words: 245 350

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 245 350
No. of Characters: 1270 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.956 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.184 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.679 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.985 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.341 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.59 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.148 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5

Hi, Thanks for evaluating my essay.

Yes, its was actually a spelling mistake "feel".

Could you please explain the reason for marking 5.5, this can help me concentrating more on mistakes.

Thanks.

Yes, I didn't understand. I was not talking in particular to this essay topic question. But in general about the different essay topics.

Could you please help us know with the tips to follow if we run out or have no clue regarding essay topic or questions asked ?

Thanks in advance..

We are talking about it in general not for this essay.

Those reasons: save time (or waste time); same money (or waste money); get more info ; make friends can apply to any topic. Give you example, suppose the essay topic is:

'Going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture.'

and you are no idea what to do, or you just have one idea, then you can pick up one (or two or three) of those reasons and apply them to the essay:

Going overseas for university study will waste money; while staying at home can save money.

Going overseas for university study will waste time; while staying at home can save time.

Going overseas for university study will make friends; while staying at home can make friends too.

...

See, you can easily apply three reasons to this essay.

It is not a magic for all essay topics, but it works well.

And you can apply those reasons to speakings too.

Let us know if you have more questions.