I am partially accepting the statement that children who are bought up in the families without huge amount of money are better prepared to solve problems in their adult years. That's true for the children who are bought up with limited resources develop a kind of sincerity and sense of responsibility towards their them and their family members too. Because they know the real value of money as at times of need they have observed their parents working hard to earn money and fulfill their requirements. They may have seen their parents leaving early to work and coming late from work just to be identified at work places . In order to eliminate risk of losing job. On the other hand they also have required to do daily stuffs like cleaning home,cooking or planning for little things to support their parents.
The reason why I partially agreed to above statement is because at times it is all about training and upbringing of children leads to learn and develop in their adult age in right way. If they are provided with only things which are essential to lives and restricted for those irrelevant requirements, these kids do learn to value the resources and it's importance.
On a concluding note I can say it's the way parent project their children they inherit in a similar way. If parents identify difference between needs and demands, children will learn and grow with same mind set.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ent project their children they inherit in a similar way. If parents identify difference between...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80416666667 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50895676909 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4626276242 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.3 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26425037057 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108596651173 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15855588024 0.0667982634062 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144627073877 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10823185134 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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