This topic raises the controversial issue whether people have to identify their goals and this will reflect and measure their success. Indisputably, that successful people dis their goals precisely but this does not indicate they did not face and obstacles in their plan. From my point of view, i generally disagree that to the true success can be measured from achieving the goals we sets to ourselves. However, to substantiate my case this essay will elaborate my reasons and examples clearly.
To begin with, it is irrefutable that to be a successful person is not an easy task and you have to plan a meticulous one assure the acme of success. One one hand, and to elaborate my point take a look at this quot " Failure is the key of success" , The first reason why i am not agree that the best way to assure success is to learn from your and the other mistakes because there is actual experience simulate the real situation.
Furthermore, the second vital point that should be taken into account is that you cannot control the external variables that have a direct impacts on the people success. Further illustration require take a look at this example, Thomas Adison faced a lot of struggles that precluded his progress at the beginning. Such as, scarcity of resources or the people culture. Thus, we cannot say this person is not successful. In deed, he tried to use the obstacles to burgeon his self because " from struggle comes strength even pain can be a wonderful teacher". Consequently, it is pretty obvious there is not specific measure for the success.
Last but not least, contrary point of view claims that the real success is by obtaining the goals, this is true in different aspects such set a clear plan very important to know if you are in the right track or not, then it is crucial to save time and effort, but we cannot guarantee the full success.
All in all, due to aforementioned reasons and examples, there is no specific tool to measure the level of success it is completely a subjective process and they have to be aware that there are a lot of struggles will face anyone want to exit from the comfort zone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'set'
Suggestion: set
...be measured from achieving the goals we sets to ourselves. However, to substantiate ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: One
...iculous one assure the acme of success. One one hand, and to elaborate my point take a ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pos; Failure is the key of success' , The first reason why i am not agree tha...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...of success' , The first reason why i am not agree that the best way to assur...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...s' , The first reason why i am not agree that the best way to assure success is ...
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Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...and the other mistakes because there is actual experience simulate the real situation. Further...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'impact'?
Suggestion: impact
...e external variables that have a direct impacts on the people success. Further illustra...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...successful. In deed, he tried to use the obstacles to burgeon his self because &a...
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Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...are a lot of struggles will face anyone want to exit from the comfort zone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, so, then, thus, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71503957784 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64635195512 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527704485488 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.5485364801 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.642857143 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0714285714 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.21951772744 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206796079176 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712383224419 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591809001635 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111074976018 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356215133834 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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