Increasing number of people are visiting places that have tough living conditions. This essay will suggest that visiting such places gives you unique experience as a benefit; however, there is a chance to catch some serious diseases while visiting these places which can be a big disadvantage.
In today’s world, visiting far places becoming much easier as a result of cheap air transport. Nowadays, many people started to choose visiting some places with hard conditions such as Sahara desert or Antarctic. Visiting these places can give a person unique experience. Since, most of us are living in the urban areas; we are very used to simple life with very easy conditions. Experiencing this kind of trip, would help to widen our global point of view and increase our determination as a human being. I have witnessed some people changed their lifestyles completely after visiting some villages in Siberia, Russia
Despite this advantage, it is possible to catch some serious diseases during these trips. Because our immune system is totally unfamiliar with this new environment, it is possible to catch some illness that can be life threatening. Number of people who caught ‘’Ebola’’ disease during their Africa trip cannot be underestimated. That is why we need to be cautious while having this unique experience.
In conclusion, having a trip to places where there are hard conditions can be very beneficial since it will provide an exclusive experience. However, there is also chance to catch some dangerous illnesses which people need to be aware of.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to visit'.
Suggestion: to visit
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...isiting some villages in Siberia, Russia Despite this advantage, it is possible t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...esses which people need to be aware of.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29249011858 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12441030072 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557312252964 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.035623019 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192407457935 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080595529258 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885658938509 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132213196976 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964936150342 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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