you have a extra room an appartment and would you like to rent it out to your students.Write a letter to university council officer and say
Describe your apartment and the facilities available
Why do you want to rent out room
What kind of tenat would you prefer
Dear sir,
I am writing to inform you that i am looking for a tenat to my 1 Bk apartment. Also, my preferable is our students who are all currently looking forward house outside.
To begin with, my apartment total square feet is 900 and whiah one is available on 2nd floor. Also lift is available. Mainly, people are looking for furnished house and which already we have set it up in my house.Earlier my brother is planning to stay in my apartment due to his intenship but unfortunately he is moving to mumbai for his project in order to this I am planning to rent it out.
I am looking for two to three students who can share my apartment and total rent is INR 7000 per anum and total advance is 30000. Also I am looking for a final year students so that next year they can vacate my apartment and before my brother come to banglore.
I hope at the earliest reply from you soon.
yours sincerely,
john.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sir, I am writing to inform you that i am looking for a tenat to my 1 Bk apart...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nd whiah one is available on 2nd floor. Also lift is available. Mainly, people are l...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Earlier
...h already we have set it up in my house.Earlier my brother is planning to stay in my ap...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...00 per anum and total advance is 30000. Also I am looking for a final year students ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...at the earliest reply from you soon. yours sincerely, john.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38596491228 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52783147082 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602339181287 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5672102261 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104390367396 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498842496467 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420043101392 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712424577143 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291619643826 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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