The article stats that about some evidence about animal fossils from their remained tissues. However, the professor explains that this tissues evidences should be identified clearly and refutes each of the author’s reasons.
First, the reading claims that many small branching channels may correspond to hallows in the bones where blood vessels were once located. The professor refutes this point by stating that soft blood tissues may belong to some other organs like lung. He provides an example in lung bacteria they may make a colony in hollow.
Second, the article stats that microscopic examination shows that red blood cells may be existed in hollow and reveal some mineral element like iron in bones. In contrast the lecture says that they are, in fact, iron is a volcanic material and may exist in some other places. He says that the probability of blood cell is low in terms of seeing iron by examination.
Finally, the author declines that collagen is explored in leg bone by examination. The professor says that this idea is problematic. He agrees that collagen is an very old factor and it is improbable that comes from just animal tissues. He gives an example to illustrate that human skin have collagen too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s. However, the professor explains that this tissues evidences should be identified ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'hallow'.
Suggestion: hallow
...ll branching channels may correspond to hallows in the bones where blood vessels were o...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
... mineral element like iron in bones. In contrast the lecture says that they are, in fact...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...problematic. He agrees that collagen is an very old factor and it is improbable th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03414634146 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48790052423 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.614425612 49.2860985944 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274543857154 0.272083759551 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925563492809 0.0996497079465 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633686654844 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147858792107 0.162205337803 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319432556103 0.0443174109184 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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