It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Although some people believe that to keep old friends is more important than to make new friends, but it seems to me, it is not a good strategy for a social person. This idea doesn't suit for a person who lives in a society and gets along with other people.
As you know everyone experiences several periods in his life, also every period has its own problems and intellectuality ; in during of every step of your life, you'll meet new faces and characters, so your options in choosing friends depend on your intellectually that is so varied.
In our childhood, we had certain close friends; we enjoyed to spend our times with them, we used to share toys with together and experience the same works and plays; gradually we got old and passed period after another; the faces in our life changed and we got familiar with new faces and new ideas. As you know, naturally the mankind is curious so he prefers to challenge with something new; getting along with new people and different ideology is one of these challenges; he starts to make new friends and they can change the line of his thought and his ideology about life; This alteration would be risky but on the other word, life's nature is own risky too, the point is, you have to choose; in fact, these choices make the human's life.
I have so many friends that I chose them in different eras and different situation. One of my best friends comes from my childhood; we have the same memories about those years; we used to play games and so on. I got familiar with new people at university and dormitory; of course the type of events and experiences is so different from period to period and person to person. But I think my friends have had the important role in my life.
To sum up, to put the issues into a nutshell, making new friends in every body's life is as important as keeping old friends that you've had.
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Sentence: In our childhood, we had certain close friends; we enjoyed to spend our times with them, we used to share toys with together and experience the same works and plays; gradually we got old and passed period after another; the faces in our life changed and we got familiar with new faces and new ideas.
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