Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
I believe that traveling to a foreign country is more beneficial than having a trip inside my country for a few reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
The first reason is learning a new language. When someone travels to a different country he needs to communicate with the people there. He needs a taxi to take him to his hotel room, he wants to order food from the restaurant, he should buy his medications from the pharmacy, etc. Consequently, he will start learning the basic language, so he can speak with the native people of this country. For example, I traveled to France last year, and I was lost at the beginning because I couldn’t speak French and communicate with the French people, but later I started learning the essential French words gradually until I became fluent. If the trip was inside my country, I would not have this experience.
The second reason is to try new food. Different countries have different types of food. Although sometimes we find Chinese, Italian, Asian, Mexican, or Lebanese restaurants in our cities, their food taste differently than the original ones. For this reason, if someone loves to try an international meal, he should eat it in its original place. For instance, my Mexican friend told me that in the United States, the Mexican restaurants do not use the same spices they use in Mexico, and their food in Mexico taste a lot better. In comparison, all the cities in my country have the same kind of, and people would not be able to eat different things if they travel domestically.
Third, when we travel outside our countries, we will see new kinds of natural beauties. Each country has something special that other countries do not have. Some countries have beaches, other have mountains and deserts. So, traveling internationally will allow us to see new natural features that we have not seen before. For example, my country only has two rivers and one mountain, and I had never seen beaches and seas until I came to the United States.
In conclusion, travelling internationally has many benefits over traveling within our countries. When we travel to a new country, we can learn new languages, try different types of food, and see new natures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, so, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84776902887 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74095683275 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5312774428 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.35 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233462366471 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702120215764 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066474769881 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139859427955 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444272928316 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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