Nowadays, advertisements are everywhere and people are overwhelm by its presence. Many branded companies are always try to lure more customers by advertisement of their products. Personally, I believe that it can be very harmful as it attracts people to spend more and unnecessarily.
To begin with, advertisements manipulates people's mind and they spend money on unwanted things. Companies try different methods to promote their product in market. For instance many companies sponsor TV shows related to their products and even giveaway product samples to the winner of that game show. Even sometimes, companies hire a celebrity to promote their product via advertisement and this action influenced many customers.
To overcome with this situation, people have to buy necessary product only and avoid to buy excessive and unwanted things influenced by advertisement. Government should take action against unrealistic advertisements and must ban that ad which focuses on harmful to person. Moreover, many products are available specially for children nowadays and companies are trying to attract them by advertising them on cartoon channel. Parents should, however, ensure that their children are protected from advertisement.
In conclusion, people cannot escape from advertising in the modern world, however people must control their urge to shop things influenced by advertisements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tried'.
Suggestion: tried
...ence. Many branded companies are always try to lure more customers by advertisement...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid buying'.
Suggestion: avoid buying
... have to buy necessary product only and avoid to buy excessive and unwanted things influence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, even so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77184466019 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12529761049 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0663751897 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0833333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145310757024 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594460290701 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308659699635 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095824597506 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219183702211 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.89 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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