The most important thing of people's life is his or her work.Without a satisfying career,the life is meaningless.To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Some people argue that people's work is the most important thing of their life.I believe that although a satisfying career is necessary,working is equal important as other aspects of people's life.
there are various reasons why without a satisfying career,the life is meaningless.Firstly,working is an effective way to deliver the value of people and meet their needs of mind.For example,if teachers find their students growing up after teaching,they will be proud of students and feel themselves useful.Moreover,people need to work to earn the money,after that they are able to do something what they are willing to do such as traveling around the world,watching a football match or buying a big house.Whereas,people who do not have a job could feel boring and even take a mental illness.
Despite the benefits mentioned above,working is certainly not the most important thing for people.In my view,family is as important as working in people's life.For instant,people who have a satisfying job and earn much money could not handle the relationship well with his family members,and he is also unhappiness.In addition,keeping healthy is the most thing for people to do anything.There are no doubt that if people get ill,they will be unable to work,hang out and travel.Finally,I believe that entertainment is an important part for people to relax themselves and put pressure out.
In conclusion,in my opinion,not only a satisfying career make people's life meaning,but also need other aspects like healthy,family and entertaiment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45569620253 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.88554676918 2.65546596893 146% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 22.4926829268 262% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 209.168592289 43.030603864 486% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 323.25 112.824112599 287% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.25 22.9334400587 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 38.5 5.23603664747 735% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 1.69756097561 1885% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358180724923 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23472095493 0.103423049105 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913026121448 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23472095493 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913026121448 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.9 13.2329268293 256% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 61.2550243902 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 10.3012195122 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.9970731707 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.0658536585 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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