Newspaper will remain the main source of getting news in the and Internet will not have any effect. Do you agree of disagree with the given statement ? Give resins for your answer and include relevant examples.
Newspaper is called the mirror of every society in this modern context. Presently, it is argued that newspapers will remain on the top of the table in case of getting news and it’s prevalence will not be affected at all by the Internet. I intend to discord with the given statement firmly and some logical points will be described in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are manifold points to shore up my point of view. First and the foremost, unlike newspaper, attaining news from the Internet is more reliable, economical and the fastest way. Internet, for example, makes it possible to watch the audio visual coverage of the news. This facility, indeed, makes getting news more interesting and easy to understand. In addition, the availability of recent updates or breaking news on Internet is as fast as lightening, simultaneously economical too, if comparing to newspaper. Needless to say, the importance of newspaper will be thrown at the back seat by the e-services in terms of having news.
Further emphasising on my point of view, people who are supposed to be as busy as bee may not have time to buy a newspaper from the market in the future. As a result, it is quite obvious that their preference for receiving news will be shifted from newspaper to Internet as it is accessible in the portable devices such as mobiles and tabs anywhere anytime. Last but not least, the amenities such as notifications for some special news, changing fonts, brightness, adjusting colour contrast provided by Internet also snatch the monopoly of newspaper.
To recapitulate, there is no doubt that newspaper has been dominating as the major source of new for many decades. However, forthcoming years are turning to be the era of digitalisation and the use of Internet will be widespread in every domain.
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Essay evaluation report
is more reliable, economical and the fastest way.
is more reliable, economical and is the fastest way.
flaws:
This essay is not about advantages of Internet. need to talk more disadvantages of newspaper.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 302 350
No. of Characters: 1454 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.169 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.815 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.77 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 105 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.346 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.329 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.548 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.047 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Will examiner find task
Will examiner find task achievement good or not with the same ideas ???
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
... e-services in terms of having news. Further emphasising on my point of view, people...
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Line 7, column 436, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , changing
...h as notifications for some special news,changing fonts, brightness, adjusting colour con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, in addition, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01993355482 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91605795592 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.723123787 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267739258692 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886434330111 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572913890185 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165948093599 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500027307349 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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