In my childhood, my grandpa used tell me tons of stories about their "good old days". They have all been etched deep in my mind. I would never forget them, ever down to the smallest details. Those stories illustrated that teachers always got good reputations in society. Realizing this, I strongly convinced that teachers were more likely recognized by society than today.
Foremost, people’s average educational level was lower in those days than now. The majority of people did not have much education. Therefore, it is no wander that teacher, as the little group of literate individuals, could be valued by society. For example, teachers used to have some kinds of privilege in their daily life. Neighbors always provide all sorts of convenience to them. It could be happened in the past that you could have free breakfast in the way to school if you were a teacher. On the contrary, with the help of modernization, the economy has improved dramatically so have the education environment. Teacher are not rare any more.
In addition, to be a teacher was never an easy case. Books used to be expansive resource. It is hard to produce. Besides, most of people were experiencing poverty and starvation. Everybody seems to be fighting for survival. The poor financial condition allowed no time for them to reading books. Since the resource in the past was very limited, one must pay gigantic efforts to acquire knowledge. Therefore, teachers would be readily recognized by the society. By contrast, todays' society endows people with various of education resources. Education materials are no longer expansive resulting from the development of computer and internet technology. Moreover, we can learn from Couresera, a free online education platform, just sitting in font of the computer screen at home.
Admittedly, in some remote area, teachers still maintain a significant social status. However, with the development of economy and trend of globalization, the education environment is getting improved. And, for the population as a whole, teachers are less appreciated by the society.
In a way, some modern social changes have been detrimental factors in teacher's identification in society. Despite such a cruel reality, there are still some instance of teacher who are constantly be appreciated by local society. When missing those good old days, it is advisable, for my opinion, to pay more attention to the education of our next generation, teaching them to learn to respect their teacher. After all, education was the cornerstone of the development of our human beings so does its major conductor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, after all, for example, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23696682464 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92937388004 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571090047393 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6372272834 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2903225806 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6129032258 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41935483871 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129950889686 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344239781485 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388276138596 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078223846165 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244640949947 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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