You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
1. Say why he / she would not enjoy going to college
2. Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her
3. Suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him / her
Dear Jim,
I hope all rights be good for you and your family. I personally think getting a job is really suitable choice for you. Because I feel you can have more success in education than work.
I think you are not enough potential in education and you can have more success in professional skills.
Should you continue your education can find better job opportunity in future with a great deal salary, however, you need a job at this situation to help your parents and siblings. I am sure you can be professional in your skill and if you like to continue your education you can do it in future with good professional background.
I think you can apply as mechanic assistant in garage, as you know, mechanical skill has widely rang need in all over the world and experience is essential how to be a good mechanic. In addition, people are more interested on mechanic who have experiences.
I hope my advice be helpful.
Best regards,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... job is really suitable choice for you. Because I feel you can have more success in edu...
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Line 9, column 97, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'rung'.
Suggestion: rung
...s you know, mechanical skill has widely rang need in all over the world and experien...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, i feel, i think, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73214285714 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70308229833 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565476190476 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7405597388 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19034508585 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834617894894 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679993000952 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109010829016 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610302173115 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.