The increase in average body weight of people in many countries has directly affected the health and fitness of the people. There are various reasons behind this problems. However, the two major factors would be discussed thoroughly in this essay along with its solution.
People these days are so much fascinated with modern technologies and innovations. They do new research and apply modern technologies to make their life easier. Very few people wish to walk to the work after the invention of the motor vehicle. They travel in a public or private vehicle, faster train in order to save time and energy. Modern Roberts are invented in order to reduce work pressure. Computers have been developed for efficient working. People nowadays prefer desk jobs rather than jobs that involve physical activities. Modern days people have converted the perspective of outdoor games by limiting it in computers and mobiles. Thus, lack of physical activities leads to an increase in weight or obesity giving a low level of health and fitness.
Another major factor is eating habits. People are much attracted towards fast foods that come in attractive packets at a reasonable cost. The availability of it has made the life of people so easier and reluctant to prepare their own food. Needless to mention that such food has more preservatives, high calories which highly contribute to shade the negative impact on the health of people ( cardiac and physiological diseases). Therefore, a sedentary lifestyle and low graded dietary intake are two major factors that are highly responsible to put detrimental effects on the health and fitness of people.
However, every problem comes with a string attached to a solution. The identification of the problem gives a clear and long-term solution to the issue. The major roles are of government to limit the access of fast food either by increasing the price or by limiting the fast food corners. There should be strong regulations of the advertisements, sales, use of preservatives and colors. Education and awareness of the general public regarding the negative impacts of the sedentary lifestyle, consumption of fast food will minimize the burning issue. Research has to be done and make it to public concern so that they understand how these two factors are taking troll on peoples life. Last but not the least, Government could use positive reinforcement like Malaysia and some other countries are doing. They distribute free train tickets if a person does push-ups and up and down up to the given limit.
To conclude, the two factors responsible for weight gain, obesity, and poor health and fitness (i.e. sedentary lifestyle and increased consumption of fast food) has to be the subject of concern for everyone. These problems will be a burning issue if it is left unaddressed. If it happens, there is a certainty that the world we live in would be full of obesity, low life expectancy rates, and low productive globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2482.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 487.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09650924025 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74647546403 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523613963039 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 784.8 506.74238477 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0906787185 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6428571429 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3928571429 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.96428571429 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19841478325 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477962548929 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525057375219 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112304138543 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284072809107 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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