Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
There have been arguments as to whether who should provide assistance to the unprivileged sectors of the community. Do rich countries help in intervening such a dilemma or should it be that it is the sole responsibility of its own government? This essay will discuss such views.
Privileged nations such as those who belong on first-world countries have an abundance of funds, thus, giving away food and supporting education can be easily be done. It is common in this time and age that wealthy nations provide such assistance as it develops strong ties between the two. For example, the United States of America has long been providing assistance in the Philippines in terms of helping out scholars and having feeding programs most especially on the undernourished children. This act of kindness among powerful nations has long been documented and should continue to do so.
On the other hand, the government of poor nations should act in such a way that being too overly dependent is avoided. There is a budget allocated on these areas, thus, officials can provide the basic necessities of its constituents. For instance, the taxes that people pay should serve as a fund towards food and education. There are also organizations among government sectors which aids on such concerns. Citizens should therefore be given such necessities by its leaders.
It has long been a concern on who should give out help to the poorer sectors of society. Although the government should solely provide such needs, it is inevitable to do it alone. Therefore, extending help from rich nations is a definite must.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
There have been arguments as to whether who should provide assistance to the un...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... areas, thus, officials can provide the basic necessities of its constituents. For instance, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0679245283 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83904024618 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550943396226 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1239191616 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308248177158 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101009830597 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523951259783 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187547842709 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344622199152 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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