Travelling is an immense experience, anyone can have about culture. Many people thinks that it is more beneficial to travel alone for learning a nation culture and experience but some individuals prefer to travel in amity of some known. This essay will explain both perceptions and i will describe my perspective also.
First and the foremost, travelling makes individuals more intelligent and independent if they are travel alone. For insurance, when a person is loving without any companiyon than that person is able to grasp many things by their self like culture of that place and experience the values of particular traditional way, the people adapted. Moreover, it is an advantage for person to explore the whole things about the way of living circumstances, more closely and enhance the experience about some particular cultural activities and makes a point independently, how much good or bad that culture is!
On the other side, when we are traveling in company of friends or some closeone, who are of same taste in wandering, gave more adventures tour to discover some culture and tradition because they have someone to discuss about the traditions and give opinions regarding that things. They do not need to worry regarding loneliness, in case they are going in different languages country. Furthermore, roaming some nation along with fellow are far much better because it gave experience and memories for rest of life about all the small things which was done during cultural tours.
In the nutshell, I would like to tell that nodoubt travelling alone will makes a person independent and intelligent but travelling in close one company makes the tour more memorizable and happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17028985507 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78359687692 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.334374713 49.4020404114 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.555555556 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214823825777 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904296690944 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658286881445 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136718121253 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507560043849 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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