Your former homestay family is coming to see you in your home country and stay from January 31st to February 10th. Write them a letter. In your letter
Make plans to meet them at a convenient location
Specify a time and date
Suggest some activities you may all participate in during their visit
Dear Mrs. Lopez,
I am writing with regard to an E.mail I received from you last night. I become very excited when I read you are coming to my hometown, Beijing, next week. I am really pleased because I would be able to see you after two years. I would really like to see you as soon as possible so that I have the plan to come airport in order to welcome you.
According to the details of your flight, you will arrive on the 31st of January around 8 p.m. I will wait for you by the exit gate number two at 7.30 p.m. If you have any changes in time or day of the flight, please let me know.
I really like to go somewhere in which we would be able to talk for hours. But if you were jetlag and tired, we could eat dinner at a famous restaurant located near the hotel you are going to stay in. Besides, there is a wonderful public garden next to the hotel we could go walking in. I have a lot of amazing plans for the following days I will say to you.
I look forward to seeing you!
Yours Sincerely,
Sarah Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing to my hometown, Beijing, next week. I am really pleased because I would be ab...
^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uld be able to see you after two years. I would really like to see you as soon as...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, really, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.0637254902 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0558042754 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5844809772 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243291076382 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880319339483 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676989689606 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145756833654 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401116976556 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.27 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.18 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.