Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it.
This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working
life?
It is true that some people know from an early age what career they want to
pursue, and they are happy to spend the rest of their lives in the same
profession. While I accept that this may suit many people, I believe that others
enjoy changing careers or seeking job satisfaction in different ways.
On the one hand, having a defined career path can certainly lead to a satisfying
working life. Many people decide as young children what they want to do as
adults, and it gives them a great sense of satisfaction to work towards their
goals and gradually achieve them. For example, many children dream of
becoming doctors, but to realise this ambition they need to gain the relevant
qualifications and undertake years of training. In my experience, very few
people who have qualified as doctors choose to change career because they
find their work so rewarding, and because they have invested so much time and
effort to reach their goal.
On the other hand, people find happiness in their working lives in different
ways. Firstly, not everyone dreams of doing a particular job, and it can be
equally rewarding to try a variety of professions; starting out on a completely
new career path can be reinvigorating experience. Secondly, some people see
their jobs as simply a means of earning money, and they are happy if their
salary is high enough to allow them to enjoy life outside work. Finally, job
satisfaction is often the result of working conditions, rather than the career itself.
For example, a positive working atmosphere, enthusiastic colleagues, and an
inspirational boss can make working life much more satisfying, regardless of the
profession.
In conclusion, it can certainly be satisfying to pursue a particular career for the
whole of one’s life, but this is by no means the only route to fulfilment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04207119741 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77562761747 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6036663486 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.833333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376035980478 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133564463822 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559101337911 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936389895253 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737717521579 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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