Some people believe that children should do organized activities in their free time while others believe that children should be free to do what they want to do their free time. What's your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, there are various kinds of extra-curricular activities for children to choose. However, lots of those activities are organized, so that children's free time is greatly reduced. As a result, children might not have enough time to do what they want to do.
Some people claim that organized activities should be in the children's free time while others hold the opposite opinion. When faced with this issue, I find comfort in the idea that more freedom should be given to the children and proper supervision is necessary.
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