An increasing number of people are buying what they need online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
Nowadays, shopping via the internet is becoming popular among a majority of people. Purchasing through online has both pros and cons for customers and sellers as well. This essay will discuss how both aspects.
First and foremost, for personals, E-commerce or online purchasing is now the most convenient way of buying products from any edge of the world at any time. This is to say that people can easily buy goods by just one click from any world-class buyers and can compare the quality and prices which save times as well as money and they provide home services also. For instance, One of the biggest online market namely Amazon which offers spectacular ancient clothes from China which are sold all over the world and clothes are delivered in front of the customer's door. In terms of companies, they could sell products directly to the customers without any intermediate wholesaler which could save an enormous amount of money. Taking a smartphone company as an example, they reveal that if they sell phones via their own official website, shoppers can purchase directly and quickly excluding any promoters consequently they can save 30% of the money.
Whereas, there are some drawbacks of online shopping In case of individuals, they could be cheated by fake online web portals. To be more precise, most of the cases buyers attract customers by attractive advertisements, however, after order they deliver poor quality products because they know that customers have no chance to try or check the products. For example, WOBC (World Online Business Council) analysed over the world in 2017 that 25% of the online business portals provide abnormal services. On the other hand, the seller faces some unnecessary problems of shipment. As a consequence of transportation failure, products delivery become late that causes a bad impact in customers relationship.
To recapitulate, Although the drawbacks of online shopping cannot be ignored, nevertheless, the benefits taking break outweigh the disadvantages because of the conventional method of shopping. Therefore, it should be carried out more properly and more effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...as money and they provide home services also. For instance, One of the biggest onlin...
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Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...d clothes are delivered in front of the customers door. In terms of companies, they could...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uently they can save 30% of the money. Whereas, there are some drawbacks of onl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... try or check the products. For example, WOBC World Online Business Council analy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27941176471 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7816299894 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5466196007 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184281934992 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058432761888 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395194392604 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104273162847 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241795428108 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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