You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel.
Dear Mr. Ali,
I stayed at your hotel from 28th to 29th of November.My room number was 303. During my stay, I found your hotel services to be really amazing. Especially, the buffet at dinner times and the remarkable room service at lunch breaks. Indeed, your hotel has made my trip to Adelaide a memorable one.
But when I returned home I found out that one of my briefcases was missing. It was a blue coloured bag. A kind of hand carry, you can say. I personally feel that I have forgotten it at my room on my bed, when I was preparing to leave. Now a days, I am in a habit of forgetting things. The briefcase carried my passport, some books, personal diary, chequebook and business cards. All these items are not valuable in terms of money but they have a lot of personal value. Moreover, I have a business meeting next week and for that purpose I urgently need some of these items.
It would be really grateful from your side if you could find my bag and send it to me through courier service. I have already made the arrangements to pay you for this service.
My home address is mentioned at the back side of this letter.
Anxiously, waiting for your kind cooperation.
Yours sincerely,
David Hong.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...our hotel from 28th to 29th of November.My room number was 303. During my stay, I ...
^^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
... my bed, when I was preparing to leave. Now a days, I am in a habit of forgetting things. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...bed, when I was preparing to leave. Now a days, I am in a habit of forgetting things. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51801801802 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51742164447 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612612612613 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3737460699 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.0 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0588235294 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23529411765 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25934880886 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724920490901 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562886535719 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122906691924 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740970857243 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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