A nation should follow a national curriculum until all the students enter their college is the perfect way to establish equality.All the students will be fairly evaluated and would be admitted into the colleges without any discrimination.All students when following the same pattern of materials and write one common examination it would be easy to rank them in the national level.For example In our country we have different syllabuses for different boards.The students studying in each board exhibit a clear cut difference in their knowledge.The students studyinng in the highly standardised board has a very indepth knowledge while the one studyinng in a low standardised syllabus has only meagre knowledge when compared to the latter.Though they are evaluated differently when entering the college,students from a low standard syllabus find it difficult to compete with the others.To change this condition a common syllabus should be adapted in all schools public and private.
In the event of a common syllabus adapted in all schools,every student would be able to compete in the national level annd would be equally evaluated.By this way the students would'nnt feel inferior when they enter into the college because they would clearly know that,that is where they belong.The national curriculum would be completely useful and advantageous in the long run.The overall standard of the nation will be improved.
Adopting the national curriculum would have to cross many downfalls unntil it is completely beneficial.In the beginning the students as well as the teachers would find it difficult to cope up with the standarised syllabus.So to ensure that, the syllabus must be slowly raised to a standard level.The idea of establishing a completely standard syllabus all at once would be harsh on the other side adopting a easy syllabus would not be useful in the overall developmennt of the curriculum,it will only lower the national standard in the international level.Another factor to be considered is that the teachers should be well trained in the new syllabus.They should be ideally fit to teach their subject in the standard syllabus.
Thus to improve the knowledge of the students and to admit them in a purely unbiased manner, adopting a national curriculum would be the correct way.The student themselves would know what is right or suitable for them to pursue after they graduate from school.In this way the future generation will be strongly built.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31713554987 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05947781453 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 97.0 23.0359550562 421% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 259.510476667 60.3974514979 430% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 519.75 118.986275619 437% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 97.75 23.4991977007 416% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.21951772744 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283454015953 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189549325218 0.0831039109588 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618435991498 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189549325218 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618435991498 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.5 14.1392134831 371% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -26.98 48.8420337079 -55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.1 12.1743820225 338% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.76 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.96 8.38706741573 143% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 11.8971910112 488% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.8 11.2143820225 364% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 41.0 11.7820224719 348% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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